Date: 2008-08-20 07:16 pm (UTC)
fufaraw: mist drift upslope (two blue)
From: [personal profile] fufaraw
I think you know my feelings on this story and where it's gone so far, where it's likely to go from here. As well as my inclination to ...perhaps...over-identify with your characters. A simple warning, "Things are very dark in this chapter" or "Things get even more difficult for (character names)" would be enough, except in the case of the death of a major character. I include the two men confined with Jensen and Jared as major characters. They would merit a "character death" note, in my opinion.

You've promised us a somewhat positive, if not a happy, ending. If that changes, I would definitely appreciate knowing.

That said, you've navigated splendidly so far, and I'm happy to trust your instincts for the rest of the saga. I am curious. I understand WIP indicates some fluidity, but in your estimation at the moment, how far are we along the storyline you're planning to tell?
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