Good to see a new story from you! This is amazing!
This world that you built is very very interesting as well as the main characters... I confess that fenom's life bother or pissed me a little, but I can understand the why their lives are like so... However I can't help and I think this is a crap.. I think this is because our feminist thoughts *smiles*... But Jeff is so amazing, so loving and he loves so much Jensen.. Jensen wasn't unhappy with his life, wasn't bitter or anything... So, I move on and have accepted it like something reasonable...
Chris was a great surprise and the Jamie's death broke my heart.. Other thing that broke my heart was see how Jensen was so afraid and so reserved and so distant about their new pregnancy with his little girl.. Perfectly acceptable but not less painful...
You asked us about hints and ideas.. Well, I'll make some..
I really would like Jensen's POV about his pregnancy... Or even about Jamie and his death... I know that Jensen and his family are doing well, but I would like that Jen had a talk with his dad and mom about Jeff and everything else.. Other: Jeff and his jealousy of Jensen on Chris or even one of Jensen's friends.. And of course I wanna see a double penetration *_* ... And would be great that Jensen had pleasure, too.
And I know you have a good cards for us, right?
Thank you for sharing it and congrats!! Brazilian hugs! (sorry for grammatical errors but English isn't my first language)
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Date: 2012-02-27 02:31 am (UTC)This world that you built is very very interesting as well as the main characters... I confess that fenom's life bother or pissed me a little, but I can understand the why their lives are like so... However I can't help and I think this is a crap.. I think this is because our feminist thoughts *smiles*... But Jeff is so amazing, so loving and he loves so much Jensen.. Jensen wasn't unhappy with his life, wasn't bitter or anything... So, I move on and have accepted it like something reasonable...
Chris was a great surprise and the Jamie's death broke my heart.. Other thing that broke my heart was see how Jensen was so afraid and so reserved and so distant about their new pregnancy with his little girl.. Perfectly acceptable but not less painful...
You asked us about hints and ideas.. Well, I'll make some..
I really would like Jensen's POV about his pregnancy... Or even about Jamie and his death...
I know that Jensen and his family are doing well, but I would like that Jen had a talk with his dad and mom about Jeff and everything else..
Other: Jeff and his jealousy of Jensen on Chris or even one of Jensen's friends..
And of course I wanna see a double penetration *_* ... And would be great that Jensen had pleasure, too.
And I know you have a good cards for us, right?
Thank you for sharing it and congrats!! Brazilian hugs! (sorry for grammatical errors but English isn't my first language)