Oh my goodness gracious! I've read both stories pretty much back to back. Very intense, very endearing, and very heart-breaking.
I wish Jack was alive so he could get killed again -- or at least hope that you'll flash us back to him getting killed. That stupid bugger is ruining Jensen's life! I'm guessing he felt entitled to another slice of Jensen, since both Sam and Jared got a kid out of him. And what? It's Jack's turn now? (Sorry, seething at the very idea, even though he's a fictional character who also happens to be dead). But seriously, did he take Jensen so he could get a baby of his own? And did he rape him? It looks like he did (if the bruises on Jensen's hips and wrists are any indication). And good Lord, Jensen's having morning sickness, isn't he?
You're killing me here!
I hope we'll get some flashback scenes to Jensen's kidnapping...? I'd like to know how that went down, especially when Jensen didn't know that Jack was a traitor. No one ever told them, did they? So the poor guy still thought Jack was his friend -- still trusted him.
Well, at least it looks like Jensen fought back this time. If it was Jack that forced himself on him, it looks like he didn't just lie down and take it like he did at the Centre. (Granted, he had no choice then -- but he does have a choice now. And as we saw when Kevin Winters tried coming back for seconds, Jensen isn't going down again without a fight).
And now we've got this Michael Collins buttmuch luring Jensen back into the lion's den. Our poor boy needs some serious rescuing. I hope that jerkface Michael falls head over heels in love with Jensen ('cos Jensen is both sexy like a fox and sweet like an angel) and realizes what an assface he's been for plotting against the poor guy!
Oh, and I love Sam. I'm so glad he turned out to be such a hero in all of this (that the first impression from earlier chapters was a false impression), because he's a really intriguing and interesting OC.
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Date: 2009-11-16 03:09 am (UTC)I wish Jack was alive so he could get killed again -- or at least hope that you'll flash us back to him getting killed. That stupid bugger is ruining Jensen's life! I'm guessing he felt entitled to another slice of Jensen, since both Sam and Jared got a kid out of him. And what? It's Jack's turn now? (Sorry, seething at the very idea, even though he's a fictional character who also happens to be dead). But seriously, did he take Jensen so he could get a baby of his own? And did he rape him? It looks like he did (if the bruises on Jensen's hips and wrists are any indication). And good Lord, Jensen's having morning sickness, isn't he?
You're killing me here!
I hope we'll get some flashback scenes to Jensen's kidnapping...? I'd like to know how that went down, especially when Jensen didn't know that Jack was a traitor. No one ever told them, did they? So the poor guy still thought Jack was his friend -- still trusted him.
Well, at least it looks like Jensen fought back this time. If it was Jack that forced himself on him, it looks like he didn't just lie down and take it like he did at the Centre. (Granted, he had no choice then -- but he does have a choice now. And as we saw when Kevin Winters tried coming back for seconds, Jensen isn't going down again without a fight).
And now we've got this Michael Collins buttmuch luring Jensen back into the lion's den. Our poor boy needs some serious rescuing. I hope that jerkface Michael falls head over heels in love with Jensen ('cos Jensen is both sexy like a fox and sweet like an angel) and realizes what an assface he's been for plotting against the poor guy!
Oh, and I love Sam. I'm so glad he turned out to be such a hero in all of this (that the first impression from earlier chapters was a false impression), because he's a really intriguing and interesting OC.
Great work with this. I can't wait for an update!